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Tuesday 19 November 2013

The sprint Race narrative


Walt:write a narrative.

One day when a girl was in class her teacher announced that their was going to be athletics and she made it into the sprint race. The girl was nervous because she wasn’t really good at running she was prepared to Lose.

When she got home she told her parents about the sprint race and that she didn’t want to do it but her parents didn’t really take notice of what she was saying. When it became night time she was lying in bed thinking about the sprint race she was really nervous. She couldn’t even go to sleep. She got out of bed and walked into the basement and found a Secret formula it gives you super speed. The girl was thinking about taking it up to her room and drink all of it to give her super speed but then again she didn’t want to cheat but she drank it anyway.

Then the next day she went went to school ready for the sprint race she was also nervous because she didn’t know how to work her super speed. The bell had rang for lunch and after lunch was the sprint race. During lunch break she went somewhere and secretly practised how to use her super speed. She was going out of control running everywhere very fast but then she got the hang of it and couldn’t wait till the sprint race ( her moods have changed ) . Then the bell rang and playtime was over. They all lined up in one big line and walked to the track for the sprint race. The girls teacher was calling up all the girls to race , they all walked to one track and waited for the whistle to blow , When the teacher blew the whistle the girl spirited she went really fast it was so unbelievable everyone was dazzled because they have never seen anyone run that fast in their lives but what they didn’t know is she cheated. She was almost at the end of the finish line and everyone was catching up to her so she ran even faster so they wouldn’t catch her . Then she got even closer and closer to the finish line. Her heart was pumping and said to herself ‘’ you can do this ‘’.

She crossed the finish line and the crowd went wild as almost wild as the Tigers are when they roar. The girl was happy but also highly worried because she cheated and nobody knew.  


Theme: Never cheat just to be a winner .

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