Fireworks

Walt:1.write a narrative.

        2. use words to paint a picture.

         3. use senses.

Fireworks.

One day it was a girl’s birthday. It was the same day as Guy Fawkes. Her family members were planning something  special for her. Then they thought of buying some fireworks that said

“ Happy birthday ”.

They went on looking and looking for a store that sold fireworks. Then BOOM! mum and dad heard a sound coming up from the street. They thought it was fireworks. They went to go have a look. They could smell the yuck smell of fireworks they were getting a headache but they went to go have a look.

When they got up to the firework store they saw all the fireworks. There were even fireworks shaped as bananas and more funny stuff. They asked the man “ excuse me do you have any fireworks that say happy birthday?.”

He replied “ yeah yeah come over here.” So they all walked to the fireworks section. They saw a lot of amazing fireworks. Mum ended up buying the one that says “happy birthday.”. When they got into the car she tried to turn it on but it wouldn’t turn on. Mum and dad were getting a bit worried. Mum was the saddest because they had to go home and do the rest of the planning for her daughter’s birthday.

A few minutes later mum phone called her sister and asked if she could pick her up because her car has ran out of gas and its getting pretty late. So she picked her and the dad up from the store and went home. When they got home they all walked down to the park gathered up all the family and got tons of food. They were all set but they had to wait for the birthday girl to come so they waited .. and waited ... and waited then finally she had come. Dad yelled 3.2.1 Go then they let the fireworks go BOOM! They were colourful and very dazzling but the smell was ferocious but they didn’t mind.

3.2.1 go they let of the big firework that said “ happy birthday.”. The little girl was shocked because it made a loud noise and it was so amazing. She loved it. When it was all finished they had a big feed . They all said that the fireworks were really eye opening and they had so much fun. It was a night that the girl would always remember. Mum was happy but the little girl was the happiest.

Theme: Always have fun.